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Remember me for who I am
Not who I was

Remember me for the promises I kept
Not the ones I broke

Remember me for whom you loved
Not for whom you hated

Remember me for the times I helped you up
Not the times I let you fall

Remember me for the wisdom I've spoken
Not for the nonsense I've spoken

Remember me for the tears that were dried
Not for the tears that were cried

Remember me for the smiles
Not for the cries

Remember me for the power I had
Not for the power I've lost

Remember me for who I've inspired
Not for the who I have disgusted

Remember me for who I have saved
Not for who I have lost

Remember me for who I have made laugh
Not for who I have made cry

Remember me for the times that we shared
Not for the times apart

Remember me for times forever remembered
Not for the times forever forgotten

Remember me for the love
Not for the hate

Remember me for the pleasure
Not for the pain

Remember me
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Author's Comments

I got this idea when I was reading the back of my cousin Ashley's obituary. Her mother found the suicide note that she left, and part of it said this:

"Remember me for the daughter I was
Not for the daughter I wasn't

Remember me for the cousin I was
Not the cousin I wasn't

Remember me for the person you loved
Not for the person you were upset with"

I loved my cousin dearly and she took her life with an overdose of heroin. So, basically you can say she inspired me to write this.

R.I.P Ashley~<3

xxShawn

Enjoy btw, and comments would be great :iconanothercolon3plz:

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-random comment-

I can relate---right before my mother died, she made me promise that I would always keep her in my mind...

It really is a beautifully written poem.
Nice job.

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I'll take you to your MOM'S Booty Bay.
:iconxwish-you-were-herex:
Ahaha.

Well, I am sorry for your mother's death. I think that no matter what, promised or not, people who are near and dear to us are not easily forgotten. You know?

Thank you very much :3


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Come on angel don't you cry

I am Alex Mckee in dA's Celebrities Crew!

Fire At Will
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Not a problem, and I am very sorry for your cousin as well.


You really are an excellent writer--I hope can compare someday. lol

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I'll take you to your MOM'S Booty Bay.
:iconxxmusic-is-lifexx:
It's a terrific poem.
And sorry about your cousin.

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X :heart:
***
"Those who make peaceful revolution impossible will make violent revolution inevitable." -John F. Kennedy
***
When you go just know that I will remember you. I've lost my fear of falling. I will be with you.
***
All you need is love.
:iconxwish-you-were-herex:
Thank you again.

And, I'm not that great, but thank you. And, lulz, you probably can though.


--
Come on angel don't you cry

I am Alex Mckee in dA's Celebrities Crew!

Fire At Will
:iconxxmusic-is-lifexx:
You're welcome

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X :heart:
***
"Those who make peaceful revolution impossible will make violent revolution inevitable." -John F. Kennedy
***
When you go just know that I will remember you. I've lost my fear of falling. I will be with you.
***
All you need is love.
:icongianamari:
amazingly written. but sorry about your cousin.

--
My Chemical Romance
It takes 1 sec. to love their looks
It takes 1 hr to love their songs
It takes 1 day to fall in love with them
It takes 1 lifetime to forget them!

"She’s a drummer. She will fucking kill you." lyn-z talking about Kitty
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i love this!!

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-with not but my wits and some smartassery!!
-i have no escape of the shadows that follow me.
:iconxwish-you-were-herex:
x3 Thanks.

--
Come on angel don't you cry

I am Alex Mckee in dA's Celebrities Crew!

Fire At Will

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